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Daniel M. Bensen's avatar

Hey Yakubian Ape, what would you say to a review swap? Smoke Break for the first couple chapters of my The World's Other Side?

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Jeff Kinnard's avatar

What a great end. Once the date was revealed I lost it! Ray being the first patient for Blackwater is such a cool plot. I loved how you structured the story. It flowed effortlessly all the way to the end and answered every question that I had.

Would you be cool with me having Dr. DiMassi make an appearance in my story? Mine is going to have Dr. K and it would be awesome to see the two working together. Obviously I wont do anything extreme with the character, as I want to see what you do when you follow up.

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