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Wow, that was a great read! I love that this part of the story is expanding! Jackie is shaping up to be quite the key character in the timeline. I wonder if someone else will write about how Fanny ends up taking care of Jackie.

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Thank you, Jeff. I thought about taking it in that direction with more of Fanny, but... sometimes, less is more. At least for now :P Also, did you originally come up with the concept of the Suff? I want to give credit where credit is due.

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Right you are. The mystery is the best part. Well The Suff kind of just happened to me, if you've seen the original post you'll know what that means. After I made the post everyone just kind of ran with it, lol.

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This is AMAZING! Do you mind if I shoot you an email?

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And, yes, absolutely. You can get in touch with me through my substack email.

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Welcome to Substack!

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That was sooo good!!

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Great job expanding on the loooooooore!

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