Thank you! There's nothing dodgy about it - it's perfectly on the level, as everything with Elysium is :) (I'm not getting paid to say this nor is this publication sponsored by Elysium)
Nov 25, 2023·edited Nov 26, 2023Liked by Yakubian Ape
The dialogue is 👌 perfect ! I didn’t like Ray at first (as an office worker but LOVED her as a character) but now I’m rooting for her to give that Dr. her comeuppance. Looking forward to the next episode!
The tension and intrigue building up here is amazing! Can’t wait to find out what this dodgy offer is!
Thank you! There's nothing dodgy about it - it's perfectly on the level, as everything with Elysium is :) (I'm not getting paid to say this nor is this publication sponsored by Elysium)
Yes! Dialogue is sharp. Tons of juicy detail. More please.
Thank you! More will come shortly, I promise :)
The dialogue is 👌 perfect ! I didn’t like Ray at first (as an office worker but LOVED her as a character) but now I’m rooting for her to give that Dr. her comeuppance. Looking forward to the next episode!
Haha, yes, she would be difficult to work with, I imagine. Thank you as always for the kind words.