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Jenn's avatar

This made me shudder and gave me the creeps full on. Very good suspense building and I like how you incorporate the innocent observer, wrong place wrong time to report the situations.

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Yakubian Ape's avatar

Thanks Jenn, I'm glad you enjoyed. It's something a little different I've been working on so I'm happy to see the intended effect came through.

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